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This is a beta demo of one of the fonts I'm working on (on the side). Was going for something more logo-ish-organic but came out sort of techno/electronic instead.

So far it has uppercase, lowercase and minimal punctuation.

Feedback appreciate.

Enjoy.
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*MartinSilvertant Feb 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
I think this has potential but you need to make it more consistent. I very much like the severe slope in letters like 'b' and 'd' and I would use that throughout the typeface.

- 'a' could do with a spur.
- 'd' should not be a mirrored 'b'. In the 'b' the bowl goes inwards more at the top while in the 'd' the bowl slopes inwards more at the bottom.
- 'e' is too geometric. Rather give it a slope like in a/b/c/d.
- 'f' is also too geometric. Avoid those straight horizontal lines in the terminals.
- 'g' could be a bit more condensed.
- 'h' and 'n' are too wide. You need to make sure that the negative space in each letter is roughly the same. Right now there's more negative space in h/n/ than in letters like b/p.
- 'r' is too wide. The 'r' is actually quite a problematic character as the strokes aren't well distributed. 'L' has the same issue.
- u/v are too wide.
- 'w' is the right width but perhaps you should add a bit of a corner in the curves at the bottom. Either that or make the 'v' a bit more rounded.
- 'y' is too wide, its descender is too long and again I think you should avoid using a straight line.

- I quite like the slope in 'B' just as in some of the lowercase letters, but most of your other capitals are just too geometric. I would revise some capital letters like A, O, G and S to give it the same slope.
- 'E' is too wide.
- The horizontal bar in 'G' is too long and too high, and perhaps a spur would look good.
- The serif in 'J' is too long. I would reduce it by half.

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:iconmajooody4ever:
so cute & nice ..
i think it is suitable for magazine and brochure ,,

is it allowed to use in commericial design ?
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:iconindepthsofsilence:
kewl. :)

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:iconjack-slim:
Like the style! fav)
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~Sasha-Melrai Nov 27, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the font. I also found it on someone else's DA [link]

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:iconyumm-lazeza:
i lovvve it

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:iconwikinerd:
A thousand words are worth a picture. A picture of a word, however...

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:iconkeepwaiting:
A picture of a word, is worth only what it says I guess :P
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:iconwikinerd:
Lol.

Awesome font btw. Tell me if you make any more light sans serif fonts.. I'd be sure to download them.

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Mood: Optimism ~sundori Sep 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it!! stylish clean, modern, and consistent!! great font
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